Full Transformations in Sales Copy: The Power of Before & After


We’ve all seen those health and weight loss ads that show you before and after pictures, right? 

Typically, they show a Before picture: someone with a higher BMI – someone they claim was in the market to “lose weight,” or “get lean,” or “tone up.” 

Then, once that person uses {insert magical product here}, they accomplished their goal. You see the after picture – that same person is lighter, fitter, stronger, and always flashing a wild smile. 

Sometimes this kind of thing makes us roll our eyes or grit our teeth – but this kind of advertising has worked to sell millions (maybe billions?) of dollars of health and fitness supps, programs, and more when basics like diet and exercise (for free) could accomplish the same goal. 

Why? 

It’s those before and after pictures. 

The health and wellness industry knows something about how our brains function – we love to see a full transformation. 

Think about if that same ad showed you only an after picture. Sure, the gal in the photo is fit and strong, and we might desire that for ourselves, but we have no idea where she started from. We can’t anchor ourselves in that image. 

What if they only showed you the before? We might resonate with the before picture – but we’re not inclined to buy anything or take action because we’re not seeing the results laid out in front of us. 

Our brains need to see and feel full transformations – and this applies to everything you write for your business. 

LIL KEY TAKEAWAYS: THIS BLOG AT A GLANCE 

  • People don’t buy services — they buy change. Your sales copy should show the full transformation your offer creates.

  • Before & after messaging works because it helps people see themselves in the story (“it could be me”).

  • Naming the before makes your audience feel seen; showing the after gives them hope, clarity, and direction.

  • Full transformations bridge emotion + logic, making buying decisions feel easier and safer.

  • Before & after copy builds trust and credibility by showing evidence of change — not just promising it.

  • The contrast principle makes your value feel bigger by clearly showing the shift from pain → relief or confusion → clarity.

  • The magic isn’t choosing before or after — it’s intentionally using both across your website, sales pages, and offers.

Sales Psychology & Your Biz – Why Brand Should Care About Sales Copywriting 

I like to call this before-and-after strategy The Full Transformation Principle – but technically, it’s usually called the Compare and Contrast Principle. 

It’s an element of sales psychology – the art and science of understanding your audience’s brain and behavior. 

Why should you care about sales psych when it comes to writing words for your business?  The short answer: you can write better words that resonate with your people emotionally, rationally, and instinctually. So they’re more likely to trust you, invest in you, and work with you. 

I have a full blog that shares a deep dive into sales psychology – what it is and why it matters when you’re writing words for your brand – but if you’re seeking some immediate answers about sales psych and want the basics before we dive into the before and after chat, here’s a quick summary: 

  • Sales psychology is about understanding your audience’s brain and behavior, so your words actually resonate—emotionally, rationally, and instinctually.

  • People make purchase decisions emotionally first and then justify them logically afterward.

  • Using sales psychology ethically helps you connect with your dream clients and build trust, not manipulate them.

  • It helps you understand buyer behavior – what motivates them, what they care about, and why they act the way they do.

  • Applying sales psych improves sales strategy across all channels: website copy, social posts, emails, and more.

  • There’s a “sales ick” fear, but sales psychology doesn’t have to feel sleazy – it’s about helping people make good decisions.

  • Key principles include: storytelling, social proof, behind the scenes, scarcity, authority, reciprocity, unity, loss aversion, calls to action, choice paralysis, the liking principle, and more – all tools to communicate more persuasively.

When you understand how people think and feel, selling feels easier, more natural, and a whole lot more human.

Sales Copywriting: How Before & After Transformations Can Help You Convert More Customers 

When it comes to sales copywriting, here’s the real-deal truth: people don’t buy services, packages, or deliverables – they actually buy change.

They’re not scrolling your site, wondering how many calls are included or how long your process takes. They’re trying to figure out one thing: What does my life look like after this works?

That’s the truth, even if they’re not consciously aware of it. 

That’s where before & after transformations come in.

Full transformations give your audience a clear mental bridge to cross between where they are now and where they want to be. 

Ultimately, they connect the dots and remove the guesswork – naming their relevant, full transformation helps people confidently say, “Yep, this is for me.”

When your sales copy clearly names:

  • their before (their current frustration, pain point, or struggle), and

  • their after (the specific outcome or relief your offer creates),

You make the decision for them to buy or invest feel easier, safer, and more relevant.

That’s why before & after copy isn’t just a nice-to-have, it’s one of the most powerful conversion tools you can use across your website, sales pages, and offers.

What’s the Deal with Full Transformations  – Why You Need to Talk About the Before and the After 

Obviously, seeing the before and after paints a picture for people. But why is that picture so powerful?

Why is seeing the full transformation from before to after such a big deal in driving buyer behavior? 

Well, there are a few explanations.

The Psychology of “It Could Be Me”

As humans, we naturally project ourselves into scenarios and envision what an experience would be like if we were going through it. We love to see someone like us succeed. 

When you name a “before” that really hits home with someone, you’ve got their interest – when you show them the full possibility of what they could be in the next sentence, they’re hooked. 

Before/after stories and words tap into this “it could be me!” principle by showing relatable starting points (where they’re currently at) and desirable end points (where they could be).

This kind of talk triggers emotions like :

  • Hope

  • Aspirational thinking

  • Self-attribution (That could be me)

And as people, we’re self-involved – we’re very concerned with our own experiences and perspective. This is a huge part of why transformations work so effectively in advertising.

Before & After Bridges the Gap Between Logic & Emotion

Before/after transforms both our: 

  • Pathos: emotional relief/aspiration

  • Logos: concrete, visible result

In other words, B&A itches the logical and emotional sides of our brains. 

The contrast of before and after gives people both feelings – the “I want that” feeling and the comprehension of “I see how it changed.”

Psychologically, this aligns with two models of persuasion:

  1. Quick intuitive evaluation (that looks so much better than what I’m dealing with)

  2. Followed by reasoned analysis (and I understand how it happened) 

Visualizing Change Makes It Feel Real and Achievable

Before and after visuals help your brain actually simulate the transformation you’re looking for.

When someone imagines themselves moving from their current reality to a future reality, it minimizes skepticism and increases persuasion.

In fact, some research shows that sharing progression steps was sometimes even more persuasive than basic before/after – because it helps people mentally walk through the change. 

All of that makes it feel possible! 

Think about it from the health and wellness scope again. Let’s say someone wants to lose 20 pounds, but they don’t know where to start. The process is overwhelming! 

They see that before and after, and they…

  1. Resonate and relate with the before 

  2. See the real results of the after  

  3. Feel the emotional nudge of “if they can do it, I can do it.” 

  4. Target the product or service as the catalyst and guide of it all

Before & After Transformations Increase Credibility and Desire

People don’t just see a “result” when they get the full transformation. They see evidence. 

When they witness a documented transformation, or someone paints the before-and-after picture that relates directly to them, it creates an emotional connection and builds trust faster than claims or features alone.

This is why before/after transformations (with pictures or words) boost engagement and conversions – it shows proof of change instead of vague or empty promises.

Promising someone something is one thing. Showing them the proof of that promise – either in naming the full transformation they’re after or showing them photos – is another. 

It Leverages the Contrast Principle

When you show something before and after, people perceive the difference as larger than it actually is – because our brains evaluate things relatively, not absolutely.

This is called the contrast effect: the second image/state looks more different (and better) than if it were shown alone.

In practice, here’s how it works: people see “pain → relief” or “confusion → clarity” and instantly get your value.

How to Use the Before & After Transformation In Your Website Copy, Sales Copy, & More 

Full transformations persuade. When you only talk about the “after,” your offer can feel unrealistic, vague, or too good to be true. When you only talk about the “before,” people feel validated – but not necessarily motivated to buy.

The magic happens when you show both.

  • Naming the before makes someone feel seen.

  • Showing the after gives them hope, desire, and direction.

That full transformation answers the unspoken questions every buyer has:

  • “Is this really for someone like me?”

  • “Will this actually work in my situation?”

  • “Can I see myself on the other side of this?”

And here are a few tips for using before and after in your copy – they’re easy, you don’t need to be a copywriter to do it!

Adding Before & After Transformations to Your Copy 

Start by asking yourself:

  • What is my audience experiencing before they work with me?

  • What specifically changes after my offer does its job?

Then weave those answers intentionally throughout your copy. You can use before & after transformations in:

  • Service pages: Call out the “before” right in the intro, and lead with the “after” in your headers

  • Sales pages: Reinforce the transformation at every major decision point

  • Website headlines: Lead with the after, support it with the before

  • Emails & launches: Remind readers where they are now, and where they’re headed

Testimonials & case studies: Frame results through transformation, not just outcomes

Need Some Help? I’ve Got Your Full Transformation Right Here 

If you’re struggling with what to say and how to say it, and you’re ready to trade hours staring at a laptop screen for words that connect with your dream people right away, I can help. 

(See what I did there? I showed you the full transformation possible!) 

Whether you need help rewriting your website copy, want to chat about strategy, or simply need a copy audit, I’m here to help. Let’s chat. Book your call by clicking the button below! 

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